✓ A 2-D plot: The completely unnecessary third dimension is gone, making it much easier to compare the values across therapies and thoughts/behaviors. ✓ I have superimposed the summary statistics (means and confidence intervals) over the raw data so readers get a full sense of the data (without it being overwhelming). ✓ The y-axis has a more informative label: We now know that it was the number of obsessions per day that was measured. I’ve also added a legend to inform readers that obsessive thoughts and actions are differentiated by color. ✓ Distractions: There are fewer distractions like
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