John Shpati

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Many a tame sentence of description or exposition can be made lively and emphatic by substituting a verb in the active voice for some such perfunctory expression as there is, or could be heard.   a) There were a great number of dead leaves lying on the ground. b) Dead leaves covered the ground.   a) The sound of a guitar somewhere in the house could be heard. b) Somewhere in the house a guitar hummed sleepily.   a) The reason that he left college was that his health became impaired. b) Failing health compelled him to leave college.
The Elements of Style, Fourth Edition
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