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12. Use definite, specific, concrete language.   Prefer the specific to the general, the definite to the vague, the concrete to the abstract.   a) A period of unfavorable weather set in. b) It rained every day for a week.   a) He showed satisfaction as he took possession of his well-earned reward. b) He grinned as he pocketed the coin.   a) There is a general agreement among those who have enjoyed the experience that surf-riding is productive of great exhilaration. b) All who have tried surf-riding agree that it is most exhilarating.
The Elements of Style, Fourth Edition
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