How to Write Pulp Fiction (Bell on Writing)

by James Scott Bell

5. Was there a point at which you felt the story started to lag or you became less than excited about finding out what was going to happen next? Where, exactly? 6. Were there any parts that confused you? Or even frustrated or annoyed you? Which parts, and why? 7. Did you notice any discrepancies or inconsistencies in time sequences, places, character details, or other details? 8. Were the characters believable? Are there any characters you think could be made more interesting or more likable? 9. Did you get confused about who’s who in the characters? Were there too many characters to keep track of? Too few? Are any of the names or characters too similar? 10. Did the dialogue keep your interest and sound natural to you? If not, whose dialogue did you think sounded artificial or not like that person would speak?