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Katia, Tim, Nari, Shiro, Kurt, Sarah, Shelby, and I have been playing poker, together.
I can't believe how many books I read that seem to have never been edited.
(the toilet waste is sanitized, first, mind you)
comma comma
“I’m sorry. Maybe it would have been better if we hadn’t heard from Houston, after all.”
comma misuse
“On the far side, the sun bursts into view, her atmosphere, pale and golden, like a flash of fire, blazing with a streak of light that trails the curve of her surface.
i swear to god, I can't even understand this sentence.
Hard to believe he would choose to end his life that way, but I guess they made the space station impossibly safe, otherwise.
changes how you hear, otherwise. i want to meet the author and have a conversation with him and speak how he writes and see if he hears how awkward it is.
And, if someone does something they shouldn’t, we’ll be able to watch the video recording, later.
bad comma
I will die, here.
grr
The only bad thing about it is that now the SPHERES are following us all over the place, again.
It is a distant memory, now.
Nothing can stop us, now.
Her stomach is really big, now.
“What do you think, now?
Now, our problem is that we’re shooting for the stars and we’d rather be going the other direction.
“I guess these shuttles weren’t so bad, after all?”
