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When he reached out towards her, Beks scrambled back, her exposed breasts bobbing.
We made it 4% into this book and breasts are already being mentioned, in Bek's view no less. I don't know about anyone else, but when I was scrambling away from something terrified, I didn't think about my boobs. And at most they did, even bra-less, was jiggle a little.
Vaxa’an had won his own female, his fated mate, from the Pit, but she’d made him see how wrong the institution truly was.
"Females are precious and need to be protected." But somehow all of the aliens dude didn't figure out that winning the women as prizes was wrong until one female human made them all see the errors of their ways. Right. Okay. Makes total sense.
The material was airy and light, the softest material she’d ever felt, but it was the scent that made her nipples bead.
Hard nipples, because that's a great indication of when a women gets turned on. Also, another mention of tits/nipples and we're 9% in.
Her old self, pre-capture,
"Her old pre-captured self" sounds a lot better.
But that only interested Beks for a brief moment…because there was a large, clear panel of glass—huge panel of glass, really—that showed…space. Honest to God, real life space, the kind she’d only ever seen in pictures or movies.
Oh my god, you can see space from the window of a spaceship?! *surprised pikachu face*
purr
We established in the last sentence that it was a purr.
Female awareness
Female awareness. Not to be confused with normal instincts and ability to read body language.
he strode over to his post, barking orders at the males with more frustration than he intended.
Barking orders, totally a sign of control.
Meaning to tease, she murmured, “Only if I can watch.”
I enjoy a flirty woman. This made me laugh, in a good way.
nipples pebble
More nipples.
Her body vibrated with every step that Lihvan took and when she slipped down where he tightly cradled her against his abdomen, she felt the unmistakeable shape of his cock.
My assumption of him carrying her princess style must have been wrong.
And it was hard. Very hard.
I'm starting to this that the Luxirians' dicks are in a constant state of hardness.
Unease made her stand from her hiding spot and, still clutching the blood ball, she ventured into the cave, thankful that it wasn’t covered in the same rocky pebbles as the vine forest was.
It will turn out alright, but this is definitely a too-stupid-too-live moment.
nipples pebbling his shirt.
Hey, first time nipples/breasts were mentioned since 18%. We got a whole 18%. We'll see how long that lasts.
nipples
The next page. Really?
Her best friend, Kate, had been the closest thing to family she had.
Don't worry, you'll be meeting her soon.
breasts,
More boobs. But at least this time it's in Lihvan's view.
pebbled nipples.
I think it's time for a different word aside from "pebbled."
breasts,
Three times in one page. Impressive.
cream.
Personal issue, but this word makes me gag.
head thrashed from side-to-side
Ladies, do you thrash your head side to side while a guy is going down on you?
He imagined waking her like this, with his head buried between her thighs, worshipping her the way she deserved.
Even with the roles reversed, this sentiment makes me roll my eyes.
For some reason, it turned her on,
Of course it does.
cuddling
You emphasize this as if you hadn't been cuddling earlier.
In turn, she hummed and let out breathy sighs when he trailed the edge of his claws through her hair and scalp before moving down to explore her breasts. He took liberties she freely gave and he cupped one exposed breast in his palm, lifting it, feeling its weight, brushing her hard nipple,
Breasts, breast, nipple
working that tongue with a precision that almost made her jealous, wondering how many ‘females’ came before that had helped him perfect it.
Bitch, he told you his people didn't kiss.
pussy fluttered
Pussy fluttering. I think that's the first time I read that one.
Horny Beks
At this point you might as well just call her "Beks" because all she has been the entire novel is horny.
Every time Beks thought he couldn’t impress her more, he did something that changed her mind.
The dude could cough and you would be impressed.
“I…” she trailed off, her throat closing a little. God, why was he so wonderful?
How low is the bar set that a dude making a woman shoes for survival makes her almost cry? We really need to raise that bar up a lot.
Beks had slashed his tires, which Kate hadn’t known about, and written—in paint—‘cheating scum’ on the back windshield. She’d signed her name right below it.
Um, that's a crime.
It did, however, make her feel better to feel his constant erection against her backside all night.
I think he might need to see a doctor about that.
His seed was beginning to climb and Lihvan thrashed his head, knowing that any second, he would cum.
More head thrashing.
“No sex. But this will feel good for both of us.”
Can they just have sex? This is starting to get a little tedious.
She wedged the underside of his cock against her slick lips, his crown just resting below the little nub of hardened flesh that he loved to suck on.
I know what the author is going for, but this seems... off, somehow.
Lihvan fucked his hips up
He fucked his hips up? Was that supposed to be bucked? We'll never know.
Jets and jets of hot seed rose up his shaft and spurted out between them, coating their bodies.
That's a lot of jizz.
Spinning around, her eyes widened and her heart froze in fear when she saw a creature looming fifteen feet away, watching her, tracking her.
Welp, knew that was going to happen.
“Does that thing ever go down?”
I've been asking that since you two met.
“Don’t be,” Kate said, eyes twinkling. “Seriously. After you…ahem…adjust to his size, you won’t want to let him out of bed for a week or two or three. Luxirian penises? Game changers.”
Right. Because all women are size queens and want men with dicks that sound painfully huge.
she was wiggling down on his cock, rocking her hips from side-to-side, taking more and more of him, inch by inch.
A totally sexy visual.
breasts swaying,
We're almost at video game level of boob physics.
Beks’ eyelids fluttered, unbelievable pleasure racking her body. With every breath she took, she felt like she would orgasm the mother of all orgasms.
And they're not even fucking yet. Dude must have a magical dick.
That glorious cock, with those glorious ridges, rubbed all the right places inside her, stimulating her G-spot, hitting her cervix.
Okay. Most women do NOT like this. It's really painful. There are women that do, but most, and I mean MOST, do not.
he fucked it right out her until she was only left with love, happiness, acceptance.
Yep. Magic dick for the win.
