The Variant Saga Boxed Set (The Variant Saga, #1-4)

by J.N. Chaney

who

"who were"

peaked

Change to "peeked".

secondhand

"secondary"

made

Change to "make".

like cords of wood.

"like cords of wood." A cord of wood is a stack of wood, four feet by four feet by eight feet.

heard

Change "heard" to "herd".

to coil.

"to the coil"

It didn’t matter if spying were illegal. People with power rarely played by the rules.

All to true.

nailed

Change to "hammered".

follow

"followed"

grasped her

"grasped it with her"

“No one wins in the end,” he said, simply. “Even after the bodies are stacked, and the dust is settled and the rubble is cleared…even when you’ve wiped it all away, you’ve still got blood on your hands, and half the world’s still dead…and then it comes again.”

blew

Change to "blow" or delete.

supply,

"supplies"

“Yes, Master,” said the man.

Like a good slave.

holstered

You "holster" a firearm, you "sheath" a blade.

temporary take

Change to "take temporary" or "temporarily take".

think,

Change to "feel".

fumbling

"tumbling"