Horror for Newbies

Jeremy McLeod
Jeremy’s Kindle Notes & Highlights
The Variant Saga Boxed Set (The Variant Saga, #1-4), by J.N. Chaney

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He was suddenly so hungry.
Jeremy McLeod
He was suddenly so hungry that what? Rather than using an intensifier like "so", just find a better adjective. "Abruptly he realized that he was ravenous." or something like that.
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The Variant Saga Boxed Set (The Variant Saga, #1-4)
The Variant Saga Boxed Set (The Variant Saga, #1-4)
by J.N. Chaney
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