Working Fire

by Emily Bleeker

Randy also turned out to be someone she didn’t even know. In fact, she didn’t recognize any of the men in her life.

Is it me or does this seem like and odd statemwnt. She doesnt know Randy. She only met him recently. To put him in the same catagory as other men she has known for quite some time just seems odd. I think the author shouls have written this differently.

“Dad is missing.” Chief Brown meandered frequently, sometimes turning up at the fire station or Amelia’s house or just wandering around town, dazed and confused. She’d occasionally joke that they should fit him with a tracking device, but even with all the experience, it was scary whenever he went missing. “I

I thought he needed a wheel chair to get around and help standing a nd moving. My own father had a stroke and lost all use on his right side. He couldnt get in and out of a chair alone. Once he was in a motorized wheel chair he could get around, but getting in and out of the house, doorways was challening. This storyline needs some help!