Dana’s Kindle Notes & Highlights

Autonomous, by Annalee Newitz

The man kept his eyes on the now invisible gun apertures in Paladin’s chest.

Seriously, do we really need five pages of the loathsome Eliasz fetishizing and eroticizing his indentured military robot? I don't need to know that he gets an erection when he fondles the guns in it's chest or that he needs to shower after they shoot up a bunch of targets. Squick.

30 Oct 19 · Flag

Chan Fry

This seems weird, but I can't talk after my recent story's content, LOL.

30 Oct 19 · Flag

Dana

It’s beyond weird. It reads like erotic fanfic or slashfic. Most of the two and single star reviews are due to the abundance of it. I find it off-putting, but for now just intend to skim through it. N…

31 Oct 19 · Flag

Chan Fry

If it happens too often, and can't be explained by plot or chatacter arc, it just comes across as gratuitous - definitely off-putting.

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