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*Flashback*-Viewpoint Keans
Matt
... What? You can't be serious. This is so pathetic its funny. I legitimately laughed when i read this. If you want to do a flashback you start off on a different chapter after establishing the character. You havn't established Keans as anything but a training dummy that's purely to make the MC not suck.
Beginnings (Adventures on Terra #1)
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