Sandhya Menon

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His eyes reminded her of old apothecary bottles, deep brown, when the sunlight hit them and turned them almost amber.
Sandhya Menon
You have to be strategic with poetic prose in a romantic comedy. People are there for the hijinks and the drama and the swoony moments, not necessarily to hear an author wax on about the way the moon glinted like a silver coin in the velvet padding of the sky. So this one was a compromise—I got to leave it in if I promised not to go overboard in other parts of the book! Also, side note: I totally got the inspiration for this metaphor from a photograph while making a Pinterest board for the book!
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Julian
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Julian
When I think about this book, this line almost always comes to mind. It's one part that really stuck with me.
Tandie
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Tandie
I think you got the balance perfect. I roll my eyes when authors wax overly poetic even in regular romance novels. It’s like $5 words. You can only get away with using that same word once in the book.…
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Emily Michie ☆
I need to see this pinterest board lol
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