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But she badly wanted to see one more thing before leaving. One more piece of verification before she swam up to the canoe.
It just seems she is down there longer than a breath of air would allow.
Watched. But not quite watched. More like seen.
Repetition .….
HOW? “No hows,” James said into the helmet. “No whys.”
How? Why? Overuse of these words that are otherwise painfully obvious throughout the spine of the story.
James stared at it for a long time, resisting the word why?
I wish Malerman had resisted it too!
No hows. No whys.
For the umpteenth time. Why?
In a house at the bottom of a lake.
Really? i had almost forgotten.
No hows. No whys.
Still?
They’d agreed never to ask how or why.
What a surprose!
she was sick of asking why.
And so am i!
