The All Souls Complete Trilogy
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Matthew flung him across the room, where he hit the wall of the hay barn, all the while retaining a one-handed grip on his father’s throat.
Sally-Ann
Badly constructed sentence. It's not clear that the grip is being undertaken by Matthew and not the man being thrown across the room.
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I was no longer Philippe’s putative daughter, but Matthew’s wife.
Sally-Ann
But still defined by relationship to a man!