Its black expanse appeared suddenly from nowhere, its dark waters lit by candelabras fashioned like arms holding torches. Dripping stone teeth glittered as they bit into the lake, and beautiful pools of blue-green light rippled from where rock met water.
I'm sorry, did you just watch Phantom of the Opera and describe everything you saw? There wasn't an original idea in this book! Elizabeth even calls The Goblin King her "angel of music" at one point. Ma'am?? Copywriting is illegal.
