Bite This (The Kurtherian Gambit, #4)

by Michael Anderle

Choose one word getting or taking

”

Switch to are

are

Let them understand

Should be talking not talked or having talked

Country’s

Businesses that have

and handed it

“Too and handed it” sounds better

I am not here to cast blame, but rather to find and fix what’s wrong.

Repeats

CEO expected many assurances that they

The CEO or Their CEO

Both felt like they had been handpicked to help usher in the next stage of human civilization.

malevolent, they

I suggest a comma between these words

Neither could figure out how anyone could top the possible existence of a new sentience.

Why is this in bold letters?

Killian was on the bird with them, Ecaterina having taken over his responsibilities back on the Polarus.

Unnecessary bolding

Unlike Michael's interventions in the past,

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Those who were naturally skeptical had blamed it on a wild animal.

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The

rumors had become outrageous enough that some had come close to the truth; zombie stories were the most frightening to the populace.

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They were about ten minutes into their patrol when Bethany Anne paused.

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It was like the whole city had shut down and everyone was hiding behind their doors.

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The mace and taser in her hands brought little comfort compared to the fear she felt.

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someone standing next to her would hear it—if

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breaking the rule she had just set herself not to look.

Why is this in bold typing?

Darryl knelt beside the woman, who was shaking uncontrollably from

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Bethany Anne quipped, “I’m not sure this will give us a reason to even break a sweat.”

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“Tell you what. If Gabrielle can’t handle them, I’ll let you finish them off. How does that sound?”

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both pistols back in their holsters and reached for her blades.

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Bethany Anne walked over calmly and dispatched each one.

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looked up, her eyes still glowing red and her fangs

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After each fight, she radioed Bobcat,

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I apologize for interrupting your rest, but we need to acquire as much information as we can immediately.

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I will be stuck fact-checking other people's work.

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Even my best friend told me I was crazy in the head, but I wanted a story.”

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“The woman had swords?” “Oh, certainly. The woman was the closest to me.

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One of the men—a black man—came over and helped me.”

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“I’m told there is nothing wrong with you. However, I have to ask you to not write the story you almost paid a high price to get.”

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Normal drugs do not result in people whose eyes glow red.”

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Rodriguez had to give this young lady credit. She wouldn’t be pushed around with the official line. “It is how I must talk about the situation. As I was saying, they killed fifteen of these things. A group of five of our police officers was attacked by one of them. We lost two of the men, another might not live, and the other two are seriously hurt but will survive. Our team is presently canvassing the neighborhoods to see if anyone will talk to us, but so far, no one will. They believe that if they talk to us, this group of foreigners might either come for them or worse, not help them anymore.” “Why are you working to find out more about them? Don’t you already know who they are?” “No, but you might be able to help me. While I can’t authorize you to write your story, I

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“Yes, but they are part of the agency. If I use them and this other group finds out, they might leave, and we cannot risk that happening. But if they are followed by a reporter, what could we do about it? We have freedom of the press in this country.” Giannini made a face that called that statement into question.

Why is there so much bold text???

“Yes, but you would. The problem is that you have your own experiences backing up your story, and people might start to believe you. We would be fighting in the streets at night, and fighting the people during the day.”

Bold… why?

I’m not going to incite anarchy, but if I help you, will you promise to help me? Not

“Yes, I will personally help you when and as I can.

Instead of a separate area for a dining and living room, it had a larger living room with a bar.

Bold

he liked her taste in music.

Bold

“since he was already dirty, he just voted himself my sock-puppet bitch. I will move my hand, and he will speak my words.”

Just love this line!!!