Dirty Bad Wrong (Dirty Bad, #1)

by Jade West

know you don’t want your career getting messy any more than

Well, now I know why I'm having trouble with this one. It isn't written as well as her other book I read. Even the formatting is off. Repetitive dialog. And so many other problems. Why does every page say its 258? WTH?

“I hope so.” I dared to smile, wishing I was as half as brave as I sounded.

Editing errors like this and worse are through out. Not many but there. I have a few problems with this book/story

I swallowed his filthy gift down and opened my mouth wide for more.

That was gross. But.... okie dokie then.

“Bleeding hell, Lyddie, you kept that you to yourself.”

Error, this is weird. There was an error here when I highlighted it. What is wrong with my copy?! All the pages marked the same page # throughout the book and errors I highlight disappear here. I am so confused.

Not on her fucking life. I stayed in the bathroom until I heard the door slam behind her.

That whole scene was asinine.

“Leave Lydia out of this,” he barked. “She’s nothing to do with this.” “So, she’s not your girlfriend?”

No separation of who is saying what. This has been a problem throughout the book. And it is aggravating