Darkness Series Boxed Set, #1-4 (Darkness, #1-4)

by K.F. Breene

roll-playing

role-playing

Puss

Pus

It felt like electricity filled room,

...filled THE room...

thing’s

things

The Boss, apparently having a real name,

Doesn't make any sense in this context.

I watched in confusion as Stefan’s face and body language shut down.

When did she learn his name?

I’m scared of walking away and never feeling, in my whole life, the way I feel with you right now.

Did he really just quote Dirty Dancing at her? LOL

quandary.

quarry?

lulling

lolling

supposed

suppose

“Fare

fair

blackout

black out

creatures

creature's

pa-zazz

pizazz

“Hee yaw, waaka waaka.”

Really?

“The next big thing. Is here. That’s an ad.

What?

cockamamie.

Weird word choice.

I could be hopelessly narcissistic at times, especially while hopeful in a dress, but I didn’t think this was a case of fashion-itis.

Huh?

with

for

as her chin met his ends.

His ends?

nonblinking eye rape

Very poor word choice.

pommeled

pummeled

reins

reigns

lope

lop

passed

past

passed

past

Charles said, “Just take it, bro. You don’t want her to duel you. She comes up with nasty shit that hurts for a week. If you’re lucky. One time, my balls literally itched for a month. No one wanted to touch me—thought I was the first to contract one of the human sexual viruses.”

LMAO

Dominicous stepped back to see the problem, and then, grinning, wasn’t helping.

Stick to one verb tense, please.

quaffed

coiffed

Worst

Worse