Debt

by Nina G. Jones

And yet, why is that I find myself smiling at random moments?

Typo

“And I how can I trust you won’t show the video anyway?”

I'm really having trouble with this book. Not only is the dialog stilted and the language somewhat juvenile, but there are typos too. Oh, and the pace is slow.

I am no position to self-direct.

Missing word

“He was asleep. I didn’t want to wake him anyway. And he’s not you.” Her words reverberate along my shoulder.

I'm sorry MG, put I can't take it any more. I'm going to dnf.