Lila’s back hit the pillar hard. She crumpled to the stone floor of the throne room, and blood ran into her false eye as she struggled to push herself to her hands and knees. Her shoulder cried out with pain, but so did the rest of her. She tried not to think about it. Astrid, meanwhile, seemed to be having a grand time. She was smiling lazily at Lila, like a cat with a kitchen mouse. “I am going to cut that smile off your face,” growled Lila as she staggered to her feet. She had been in a lot of fights with a lot of people, but she’d never fought anyone like Astrid Dane. The woman moved with
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Nothing makes me happier than writing fight scenes. It's this brilliant challenge to ensure that a reader can SEE the fight play out without you narrating every blow. Seriously. If every scene could be a fight scene, I would make it one. But apparently characters need to do things like HEAL FROM FIGHT SCENES. Whatever. Buckle up for more fight scenes.
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