No, You Hang Up

by A.J. Merlin

I’m not dumb enough to invite death by walking into a rest stop frequented by traveling clowns.

Okay, that's a bit humorous. And Good Point! Lol

Mads appears in the room and I mouth my neighbor’s name at me, causing

Huh?

The night air is starting to smell like rain, though it’s a distinct smell here than it was down in Florida.

I wish the writing was a bit smoother. There's nothing really wrong with this sentence. It's just not an easy flow to read. And it really dosen't make sense.

Huxley is a killer. I don’t want him anywhere near me—whether I’m asleep or awake—and I’ll tell myself that until I believe it, if I need to.

Honestly I don't understand the EXTREME instant lust/attraction etc. It went from 0 to 100 before they saw each other. And come on! All this from ONE prank call?

though I don’t move while frees his already

definitely quite a few places that have missing words

have to work in a few hours, and I like you sweet instead of…you know. How you normally are.”

that one was funny

but clearly the alcohol in his veins is enough

Another problem with this story is how often it repeats itself.

that I’m not as worried as I should be about the situation.

As I should Be As I should Be As I should be UGHHH

I really should

This author apparently has a thing for OVER USING the same phrases thoughout this story. I can tell you now, I won't be reading another of her books