Tell me what you think of this one? My favorite line is the first: “Estelle thought she’d like men better if she were a man herself.” Of course, then she manages it and . . . well, I’ll let you read the rest. Originally, I thought that Estelle would become a man by drinking a potion, but then I thought it would be better if there were a device that enclosed a person inside, like a womb, and that was how the person changed. I think my descriptions of the inside of the device are rather good. They gave me shivers, anyway.
