Malice (Malice Mafia, #1)

by Coralee June

Civellas don’t have friends. We have enemies and business partners.

I felt a sickening wave of arousal wash over me. There was something about the possessiveness in his tone that made every single one of my muscles curl up like a cat. I was preening and desperate. Why was I so determined to be claimed by this man? Did I have Stockholm syndrome?

Ugh cliche and annoying

"I think you could be Eve herself, Juliet."

Cute but why? He has known her through conversations overheard at the diner table. Why are all the brothers falling for her? The author hasn't made her stand out in anyway. Shes an average girl. There is no reason other then lust for brutal mafia men to act this way towards her. Cliche main character trope. Plain basic girl steals the hearts of powerful men for no reason other then the author says.

Untouched.

She's literally not a virgin so what does this mean lmao

"You're my best friend, Juliet. I'll always love you. I just want what's best for you. I can't support you getting close to my brother's business. I've spent my entire life wanting to get out, and I'm not sure I can forgive you for willingly putting yourself right in the middle of it all."

I still didn’t know who this Cora bitch was, but a sudden wave of fury washed over me. I wanted to kill her. End her. Ruin her.

Girl...what? Barely know the nigga and this family is ruining your life like...

"I really hate this bitch," I growled, suddenly feeling murderous.

i can say the same about you

I would literally cry what the heck is wrong with this chick!?

I NEED A WILLIAM NOW!!!!

I’m hating. When will it be my turn

This chick is so naive like… Vicky is literally their sister, she knows her brothers way better than you Uggh I’m so sick of these annoying mcs

Girl bye

He’s the heir, I’m the spare.

I get it but girl is such a hoe SHE WANTS ALL THREE BROTHERS?! Have she no shame

Girl….

Periodt

Gucci? It’s giving classless it’s giving new money it’s giving hit a quick lick and now I think I’m the shit

Corniest fight scene ever….

Why is this girl so annoying

Rolling my eyes and sighing

Hate. Let me tell you how much I hate you.

This shit is so corny…

Now girl…

She belongs to the streets.

Sis forgot about the incriminating evidence against her

Cricket cricket cricket

This dialogue is so cringe. Seems like it was written by a middle schooler that just discovered wattpad

Despite his goals for putting me in the trunk, I didn’t fear him like I should. I pitied him. Why did he feel like he had to go to such extremes? Why was he so scared to lose me?

This entgire sentence literally just pissed me off

I squealed, as if Anthony had dropped me off at a Harry Styles concert and not the house of a mass murderer.

This was written by a middle aged woman...

Bruh

Descriptors should be in the beginning. This feels unnatural

But why tho? Like… there hasn’t been any build up regarding their relationship. This is corny not romantic. He just meets her, uses her and all of a sudden wants to burn the world for her in a span of a few weeks, even though he’s treated her like she was discardable? It doesn’t make sense especially considering he can and has had any woman he wanted. He’s used lots of women according to Hale, so what makes her different? Author should have fleshed that out more so that quote could be more impactful

Bruh…this is so freaking corny!

Sis was struggling to write an action scene because this is so anticlimactic lmao. So guards corner them in the room, make some goofy Disney channel ass dialogue about how boss is going to be happy then immediately get shot like their guards are down completely? Make it make sense

Show it don’t say it would apply here I think. Of course something has to be said but implication would be better or 3rd pov, or less outward. Being so bold is kind of cringe.

Palm to palm, we held hands and walked upstairs. Malice was in his bedroom with the door open, and when he saw us, he slammed it shut.

This girl literally has no shame...

I belonged to each of these men while knowing at the same time that I didn't. I'd passed the point of no return and crossed that thin gray line of right and wrong,

Sis is romancing these men like an otome game

friendship with Vicky, not worrying about how it would affect their sibling relationship. I found pieces of myself within each unique relationship.

So she's selfish. That was obvious

I'd need to find William and see if there was still any hope for us. After working up my courage, I went downstairs and decided that if I ran into Malice, I'd ask him about his promise. I still wore the necklace we'd battled for. The sentimental jewelry felt like a weight around my neck. A secret.

Is she not embarrassed to be like this....

"I was wondering where you'd disappeared to today, William. Did you decide it was time for our sister to come home? I'm not used to you having the balls to defy my wishes. Someone should take a photo of the moment."

Lol

"You're killing people and working at a sex club. What happened to you? You've literally become all the things I hate about our world. William told me everything. He said you spent the night with Anthony last night, too. I thought we discussed this," she shouted.

Vicky i love you. The only one in this story with sense

"I get sent halfway around the world, and you're here fucking my brothers. I thought we were friends."

EXACTLY!!

"I shouldn't have to share you. I had you first!" he screamed.

William William William i need you to get it together. You deserve better

Vicky let out a dark laugh. "So that's what's going to happen? You're just a fuck doll getting passed around by my brothers now? I didn't realize you were such a pathetic slut!" I opened my eyes in time to see spit flying from her mouth at her cruel slur.

I stand with vicky

"You are my sister, so that allows you certain privileges and allowances that others wouldn't get. This is your one warning. If you ever talk to Juliet like that again, you will not like the consequences."

Hes a piece of shit. Like choosing some random basic hoe over his own grieving sister?!

I protect the people I care about, so know that I won't hesitate to remove anyone in her life who threatens her happiness."

So you don't care about your sister?

And, Vicky? Welcome home. Don't fuck up, or I'll send you away again, and this time there will be no coming back." Vicky shook her head in disbelief. "You're seriously choosing her over me?"

Wooow this is insane

How dare she betray me like this? Juliet was my one thing—my person. My everything. I loved her like a sister, and she went behind my back and fucked my brothers.

I feel so sorry for you vicky

First, I realized that Malice didn't actually care for me. Second, I realized that William didn't love me enough to fight for me. And third, I learned that I needed to leave before my heart was

Bruh...this is ridiculous. She is just now realizing this? I am starting to think the author did this on purpose

Vicky was right. I was nothing to these men. How could I have been so stupid? I threw away my best friend, my morals, my humanity for them. I killed for them. I died a little for them, too.

Blank stare