The Rift

by Douglas E. Richards

managed to get his hands around James’s neck

I prefer AP style over Chicago style and would like to read it as James'.

the President with his ministers,

Presidents don't have ministers.

saw the Navy Air Force base,

Air Force base or Naval Air Station, not Navy Air Force base.

bringing us into World War 11.

World War Eleven?

two ministers,

Presidents don't have ministers.

“I’ve sent a photo to your phone, Office Hoult,”

Office Hoult? You mean Officer Hoult?

You, Dodger, and Wolf broke into Nasa.

NASA is an acronym that is typically displayed in ALL CAPS.