Corrupted Tides (Eldritch Depths #1)

by S.M. Campbell

He kicked the legs out from under one of the guards who stood there with a dumbfounded look on his face

Perfect example of where telling is more effective than showing. I know what a dumbfounded look is. I have imagination. If I didn’t know, I’d use a dictionary and figure it out. Don’t change Campbell. 🤘🏻