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injection trajectory.
nonetheless.
But be careful, though.
“Cannabis.
so to speak.
“She’ll be out for a few hours.”
“She’ll be out for a few hours.
Needless repetition; just stated exactky the same, a paragraph back.
Nonetheless,
Still,
so to speak.
Again author uses hack phrases.
of course,
Nevertheless,
Huh? Why "…Nevertheless...?" Senseless.
But
but
Now t...
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Nonetheless,
But
They arrayed themselves around Peter VanHoff’s field of vision like dead relatives in a Victorian séance.
Is this from the author's personal experience or his personal belief?
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before woke up again.
Proofreading miss…"…[he] woke up again…."
But his injuries paled in comparison to the torment that afflicted Decker, so Jann had no qualms about relocating him to the floor, while Decker took up residence in his stead.
Huh? Things were pretty silly, actually dumb prior to this. Now, a seriously injured crewmate, a MEDICAL DOCTOR, is relegated to the floor, so an infected, raging, homicidal crewmate can use the sole bed in medlab?
If you want to stay over there and play mommy, that’s your problem.
Some honorable mission commander.
malaise
This choice by the author, continuing to label the vector as "…the malaise…," shows how lost he is.
Of course,
of course.”
Decker’s safe enough here for now.
Really?
“Fancy a toke?”
Stoners on Mars.
of course,
Hobbyist level writing skill set.
Jann wasn’t sure if he was thinking or had simply stopped talking.
Maybe STONED?
Decker is a vegetable.
He's a known threat, currently sedated and restrained. Still a severe hazard to lives and survival.
This is major and we need to get this information back to COM.”
Freudian Slip?
No doubt, the two mugs of colony cider and the smoke had a lot to do with it.
A compound fracture, broken ribs and collar bone, blood loss, and being heavily medicated, all within one (1) day, doesn't contribute to "…fatigue…?"
Nevertheless,
Hack.
Nevertheless,
Hack.
contamination
“Indeed,
“Nonetheless,
Of course,
Suffice to say,
Who talks like this? Author apparently is a fan of stilted, Edwardian dialogue.
this coffee is simply ambrosial.”
Of course,
Nevertheless,
Hack writing.
Nonetheless,
He smiled and at that moment Jann found herself quite attracted to this enigmatic soul.
Insane premise given the circumstances. Maybe in a few months, sure, but after a few days of this horror show, no.
“You know I can’t promise that. I’m a doctor. My duty is to save life,
BS.
of course.
Suffice to say,
Nevertheless,
