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Guardians
I think you mean the Indians, Stephen.
Dean spins on his stool and hauls off, fist wrapped around the shot-glass.
Nobody who throws a punch in a bar would wrap their hands around a shot glass. NOBODY.
A Musk-mobile.”
Just write.
There is no blood in the car,
Four gunshot wounds inside a car and no blood? Bullshit.
“Glass, Holly?” Corrie asks. “No, thanks.”
This is the same character who still wears a COVID mask, brags about how vaccinated she is, drinking out of a can that who knows where it's been? Continuity matters...
shit,
Don't you mean 'poop?' This is Holly Gibney.
She couldn’t come, she’s in a wheelchair!”
In late 2024 (Trump assassination reference), a venue doesn't have wheelchair accessibility?
“Insurance companies are so poopy.”
More political/social commentary... just write a good story.
“That’s him. Her. Whatever. I’m almost positive.”
Nothing like badgering a witness...
Except for the elastic bandage wrapped around one knee and calf, that
he's pretty bad, that's not where a hamstring injury is treated.
Before Holly can decide if that’s racist, Izzy pushes on.
Give it a rest. Write about vampires again.
hamstring pull.
wearing a bandage around his knee. research much?
suitcase
What happened to the other? Man, thought you'd have better editors.
she
Can't keep the number of suitcases straight, but don't miss a beat with pronouns.
reusable
How green of him!
SpaceX
Take that, Elon!
‘Have you ever tried to hire someone to clean up elephant shit at ten in the morning?’ Got a big laugh.”
Good one, Mr. King.
Bill Hodges’s gun out of the safe in the closet.
A private investigator that uses a hotel safe isn't that bright. I wouldn't secure my mailbox key in one.
exuding ownership.
Like that's a bad thing?
Staring at him.
Dog shit of an ending...
