Why Don't You Make Me? (Why Don't You? #1)

by Rae Knight

No, you really can't, Tori. He's huge, and way too in shape. The most you'll do is scratch his eyeballs. Calm down, pussy cat.

Right now they're in a confrontation. Why is she being irreverent right now? This is annoying and hard to take her seriously.

His lips took me back to that night—the night I felt pleasure like no other. It's the night that left me spiraling out of control, seeking the same high from other men, but never finding it. His stunt revealed more than I care to know… he truly is the only one that can make me feel alive.

I understood that previously....

“You're right. I don't know what that's like.”

tf?? he bullies her!!!!!!

“Great. Pass it over,” he casually states, eyes still on his own plate. I gawk, mouth open, not wanting to hand over my hard work. I want to eat it!

what's the point of all this? god, she's getting so annoying...

It's fucking delicious! Jesus! I moan because all good food must be praised, but of course, I get a side-eye from Blaze.

this is pointless..... boring

A fire is lit inside me, heating me to my core, releasing fluid between my thighs I never thought I'd feel again from a singular kiss.

why??? like calm down. stupid.

feeling his erection through his pants right against my aching little pussy.

WHAT THE FUCK? CAN WE STOP DOING THIS? GROSS. LITTLE?? TFFFF

This motherfucker is edging me.

Why are you repeating yourself? I KNOW. I can read.

“I shouldn't.” I shyly shake my head, biting my tongue so hard, I can taste the metallic tang of blood.

She's so damn stupid. Like what's the point of this? This is so irritating.

Ah, yes. Here's that bad decision train you never got off of, Tori. We're chugging along great. Next stop, death.

GOD I can't stand you, Tori. You're stupid and dumb.

“He acts all sweet and innocent, takes me out on a date with plans to sell me to you at the end. He owed you money and I guess he thought a cheap date to the movies was a decent enough exchange for a shitty life owned by you.”

This is so unrealistic, it's pathetic. Honestly, I had hopes for this book. THIS IS ONE OF THE DUMBEST BOOKS I'VE READ.

I'm not a show cow for sale.

But you just gave yourself to the devil, you dimwit. I'm so close to not finishing this stupid book.

Did a crime lord just hit on me? Did I just reject said crime lord in his own office without anyone around to save me? Yes, yes I did.

shut up!!!!!!!!!

It's official—we're one hundred percent not surviving tonight. Way to go, Tori!

I really hate you and your fake sarcasm.

“I don't think you will. Otherwise, you would have done so already rather than putting on this show.” I'm betting my life, and theirs, on the fact he's bluffing, because surely he wouldn't actually shoot them, not when he was concerned about who Ryder's parents were.

Are we really doing this? She's literally the dumbest. I'm done with this stupid book.

“I don't get it. You say you don't want money as payment, but then you say you lost money because of us. So, what exactly is it that you're wanting?”

I have never wanted to punch a fictional character so much in my life until now. I cannot stand you at all. God, you make Kyah from Pretty Monsters seem more logical.

Let's get real—you did that on your own by opening your mouth and talking with the police officer, Tori. You should have just let things be.

Honestly, this whole talking in 3rd person is not for me. I'm done. Just fucking done with this stupid book.

“Well, if that's all,” Nico lifts his eyes to us, signaling he's done with this entire thing. “Feel free to leave. I'll come knock on your door when you're needed.”

All this is some made up "conflict" for them all to resolve. An obstacle for them to overcome. I was literally so excited about this book. It's dumb. Bye.

my innocence,

Your innocence? You're stupid! You're literally dumb and you're not different from ANYONE. Idiot. I'm done with you.

Ihate

yeah, I hate is two words as well.

“Don't do it, Doll,” Blaze whispers, noting my coiled muscles and narrowed eyes.

wow he's psychic

“Ithink

I think is two words. I'm just skimming now.

Don't worry, Tori. Your monsters are coming for you.

So I would've read all this just for there to be a dumb cliffhanger? God. GROSS.