Kate O'Neill

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The problem with the passives that bog down bureaucratic and academic prose is that they are not selected with these purposes in mind. They are symptoms of absent-mindedness in a writer who has forgotten that he should be staging an event for the reader. He knows how the story turned out, so he just describes the outcome (something was done).
The Sense of Style: The Thinking Person's Guide to Writing in the 21st Century
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