Kindle Notes & Highlights
“but what does it mean.
?
“He’s not a normal mech is he?”
mech, is he?
well not really an Uncle,
well,
Lena who was still too weak to stand and Orson who sat in the cat,
Lena, who... Orson, who
her audience would not stand up to anything more,
stand for
an eight-hundred-year-old symphony.
So the apocalypse happened in the 21st century.
his words rang out:.
No period.
Denny who had tucked his knees
Denny, who
the dance of freckles across her nose the wisps of hair
nose, the
But that’s not what bothered her.
that wasn't
“What about stairs.”
?
Lena’s voice was barely above a whisper. Give me a
"Give
three-hundred pound beast.
three-hundred-pound
“I don’t think he got the memo.”
They have memos?
a four-inch long cylinder
four-inch-long
“I’ll be okay Commander.
Comma before term of address.
at the ranger’s barracks,
rangers'
A bath had been laid for her
Tables are laid. Baths are drawn.
Minna and Ferlan seemed nonplussed by the reactions.
If you mean "unfazed," which, by context, you do, don't say "nonplussed," which means the opposite.
Roger spun in a circle beside her chair, the sound of his wheels grated against the silence in the room.
Comma splice
“Chancellor please make note
Comma after term of address.
diligent about filling out these records everyday.
every day
