She could hear the attenuated sounds of the workers banging and clanging topside as though from a great distance. The ground shivered ever so slightly underfoot with their exertions and dirt cascaded from the fallen roof.
I like the rich detail in writing. It helps to envision her every step of the way down the corridor before she finds herself in front of an underground maze. Where could the figure she saw ever be? Let's hope she does not encounters it in this chapter.
