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The midnight blue tips of my ebony hair
Is this a red flag? It feels like a red flag.
dammit,
This is getting repetitive in an annoying way
Tory wasn’t much for the feelings type, but that didn't mean they weren't there. And though I sometimes wished for a few more warm hugs, she always showed me she cared in her own way.
my eyes anime wide.
Oh. No. No no.
this beauty
Its actually the repetitiveness thats bothering me most. The writing is clumsy but repeating so much is jarring and takes me out of the story.
this beauty
🧐
these beauties.
This dude says it too lol
Holy fucking shit on a cornflake.
Heh
I turned away from the episode of Breaking Bad where I'd maybe (not maybe) been taking mental notes on ways to solve our current predicament.
#mood
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midnight locks
What colour is that? Blue or black?
The navy quilt above
Literally say sky damn
My mouth parted at the beautiful sight.
🧐
His gaze drank me in for an endless second,
This reads like a weird regurgitation of cliche YA terms. Like someone is mimicking what theyve read in the past. Its not working for me.
Her gaze roamed over my sister and I hungrily as she drank in every detail on display
Every look is a gaze, Every gaze is hungry and drinking, apparently.
gaze
Dude im getting real sick of this word
gaze
Lol
gaze
Lol
fear crushed my heart.
This is part one of my point
fear daggered into my heart.
Part two, this reads like a creative writing assessment you hand in when you're 13. Its so awkward and clumsy to read.
gaze
raven hair.
Someone needs to tell the authors that you can use boring colour words to describe hair
gaze
gazing
gazed
gaze
gaze
My lips parted in shock
Im also noticing that lips parting in *emotion* is becoming a common phrase
gaze
I blinked at the wall of fire,
Like repeated blinking orrrr
butt-naked.
I thought it was buck naked am i wrong?
gaze
gaze
gaze
Tears never did anyone any favours, but sometimes they just needed to fall.
Me every day
gazed
gaze
gaze.
gaze.
gaze
gaze
gaze.
gaze,
This one actual works tho haha
Me and him? Liaising? Please no.
They gon fuck
headed inside
This term is being used a lot too, also annoying me haha for something different. Mostly because of the ed, like lets head out, ima head in now, headed in sounds weird to me.
my lips parted in surprise.
Bitch cant keep her mouth closed
“You’re a walking talking encyclopaedia, you know that?”
My year 2 teacher used to say this to me lol
gaze
he purred
Why are the men purring all the time bro lol
gaze.
gaze
