“Just at the very end of the section. You’ve written, ‘That was one villain vanquished, but the poor souls across Exandria who required my aid remained innumerable. I turned to the sunset and began the journey toward my next big adventure.’ Let’s try instead—” Tary scratched out the line and narrated aloud as he rewrote: “‘My most trusted companion, Doty, and I turned to the sunset and began the journey toward our next big adventure.’” Creak, said Doty. “Yes,” said Tary. “I think it’s much better like that, too.”
