Feathers That Bleed
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My cock slides in and out of her ass as I pound into her from behind.
lauren ⋆☽˚
THIS IS THE OPENING LINE?!?!
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She turns around and fixes her skirt, followed by the rest of herself. “My name’s Sylvia,” she says to me. I give her a quick head-to-toe scan as I click my belt back on, then walk away from her, leaving her dumbfounded. I don’t care who she is, as long as she gives me what I want. Which she did, of course.
lauren ⋆☽˚
i need the kind of confidence that the classic manwhore mmc exudes
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I lean in, bringing my face close to his, and am immediately hit with a smell that’s a blend of sweat, luxe cologne, and my absolute favorite: blood.
lauren ⋆☽˚
SORRY?
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ahhh yes the scent of blood... my favorite.....

@Lauren- WHAT HAVE WE DONE
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LMAOOOOO
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this is not cute
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Besides, being alone with her might give me a chance to do the thing I’ve wanted to do since she got here: stake my goddamn claim on her. And yeah, it’s very Neanderthal-like of me to say that, but this is who I am, and Cignette will have to get used to it, whether she likes it or not. Because one thing I know for sure is that she can’t be with Gavin, not after I’ve laid eyes on her.
lauren ⋆☽˚
don't mind me, i just think this is hot.
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love a Neanderthal-like man
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we need to be locked away
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“I’ll see you at midnight, Little Swan.”
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Okay... Little Swan is kinda cute
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Occasionally, when we’re out alone, or when he’s about to head home for the night, he’ll kiss me till I lose every ounce of my breath, but that’s as far as we go. For both of our sakes, of course.
lauren ⋆☽˚
wait... i want her to get with him instead.. booo
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He grins, and Christ, it’s so damn full of lunacy that it makes my pulse quicken.
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LOLLL she's just like me fr
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LAUREN 😭😭😭
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“You became mine the second our eyes met,” he says. “But if you want that asshole instead, then I gotta know now, because if I find you with him after you’ve told me otherwise, then it won’t end well.” He smirks, and a piercing chill runs down my already cold spine. “Both for you, and for him.”
lauren ⋆☽˚
when he threatens her too 🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶🫶 >>>>>>>>>>>>>
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“So cruel,” he repeats. “Stealing my breath like this; making me question my fucking morals.”
lauren ⋆☽˚
ok some of these lines be hittin 😮‍💨
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This man is going to get me brutally killed one of these days, and honestly, I can’t wait to meet my end, especially because I know he’ll be there with me – making me yearn for him, even in death.
lauren ⋆☽˚
GIRL SEEK HELP!!!! THIS IS NOT OKAY!!!! YOU JUST MET HIM?!!!!!
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these girls with no life experience or personality in these kind of books are always like "oh he's a psychotic murderer?? He's been stalking me??? Aw 😇"
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shes just quirky, leave her alone
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She’s not like other girls
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Dorran: Did you touch yourself after I left? I press my thighs together as I reply. Me: I’m offended that that’s even a question. Did you? Dorran: I did borrow your shorts, didn’t I?
lauren ⋆☽˚
when he steals her shorts, not her underwear lmao>>>> ?????
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Shorts not underwear....that's a new one
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My chest warms against his stare, and my breaths turn shallow as I continue to watch him take me in. “Dorran.” He meets my gaze. “Yeah.” I lean my head against the wall and grin at him. “Show me what I do to you.” He arches a brow. “Is that a command, Little Swan?” I shrug. “Maybe.”
lauren ⋆☽˚
😩😮‍💨
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oooof.....why does his name have to be Dorran though 😩
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i know lmao, her name is worse tho...
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“This is what you do to me, sweetheart. This is how much I want you; how much I want to ruin you, fucking worship every part of you.”
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like okkkaaaaayyyyy 😩
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OKAAAAAAAYYY 👀
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And, as embarrassed as I am to admit it, he also helped me take a dump and a few pisses throughout the day.
lauren ⋆☽˚
she really went through this entire book, edited it, and decided to keep this line in.. ok
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um?????????? hello????
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true love <3
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LIKE THEY BARELY KNOW EACH OTHER AT THIS POINT TOO????
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Her face… The left side looks slightly purplish, and there’s a bit of swelling there. My hands clench into vise-gripped fists when I see the fresh scar on her right cheek.
lauren ⋆☽˚
LOVE THIS SHIT RIGHT HERE
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EAT THIS RIIIIIIGHT UP
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She doesn’t look up as I approach – not even when I fall on my knees in front of her.
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ughhhhh need a man to fall to his knees before me 😩
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I push my fingers into her slightly damp hair and kiss her harder, but she makes a noise and pulls back, then places her cold fingers over my mouth before saying, “Gently. It…hurts.” She points at the bruise on the left side of her face, and my chest contracts. “Of course.” I attempt at kissing her softly. “I’m sorry,” I breathe, then part her lips before slowly running my tongue along hers.
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😩🥹😮‍💨
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this is so cute wtf 😩
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there were some cute lines 😩 not many, but some
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“The truth doesn’t have to be convincing, Dorran,” he said. “The truth is the truth. It just is; it doesn’t have to be bounded by anything.”
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“Let’s just say I have a soft spot for assholes who talk back,” he answered.
lauren ⋆☽˚
same
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“Can’t pick a spot?” he muses. “Something like that.” I smile at him, and what he does next – it’s one of the most erotic things he’s done since I’ve known him. Dorran tilts his head to the side, giving me full access to his neck. His muscles flex and shift, and I swallow, restraining the urge to put my lips on him.
lauren ⋆☽˚
😮‍💨😮‍💨 i am going to jail 🫶
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“You trust me enough to put yourself in such a vulnerable position?” I ask him. He straightens his neck and looks up at me. “You could cut me open right now, Cignette, and I’d still trust you – have faith in you to put me back together.”
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extreme.. but i like the sentiment
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She nods. “Words, Little Swan – give them to me.”
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😩😩😩
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“Chase was generous enough to grant us and Solo an open ground for our kills tonight,
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???
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Dorran laughs against my lips, then opens them for me and kisses me back in a frenzy.
lauren ⋆☽˚
lock me up fr and don’t let me read anymore books like this, i need saving
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*we need saving*
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“Kiss me while you choke me,” I croak out. “I want you to feel how my breaths stutter for you.”
lauren ⋆☽˚
i need therapy
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girl same
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lmfaoooooooo who hurt us 💀
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“Stay safe, okay?” I whisper. He grins. “Never. But I’ll try for you.”
lauren ⋆☽˚
i’d kill for a man like this
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Dorran sighs. “I’m sorry,” he tells me, and his crew whip their heads at him like he’s said something forbidden. “What?” He glares at them. “I’m capable of accepting when I messed up, okay?”
lauren ⋆☽˚
<3
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ugh love a self-aware man 😍
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Whoever says morally grey guys don’t appreciate tranquility and wholesome moments in their lives, is full of shit. Because I’m as grey as grey goes, and I’ve still got a boner as hard as a fucking brick from the brief cheese-talk Cignette and I just had.
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👀
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not him referring to himself as morally grey 😭
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LMAO
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him saying cheese-talk sent me
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“Or what, fuck-face?” Mave challenges. Within seconds, the crew is on their feet. “The fuck did you call him?” Jayce says,
lauren ⋆☽˚
LMAO IM SCREAMING THIS IS SO LAME!!!! NOT THEM GETTING WORKED UP OVER FUCK FACE AS AN INSULT GOODBYE
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We get back to our food, and as Dorran and I fall into a debate about which vintage car is the classiest,
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i cant imagine a more boring conversation
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“My God, you’re beautiful, Little Swan,” I say by way of greeting, and hear Alex sigh in the background.
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im alex
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“Wear something easily accessible tonight.” “For Colton, or for you?” she sasses with a smirk. A flash of anger cuts through me at her words, and I grit my teeth before glaring at her. “Say that again, Little Swan, and see what happens.”
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ugh need a man to threaten me like this fr
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“My, my, Little Swan; what’s gotten into you tonight?” he all but purrs. “Dancing with strangers like this, giving them a show of what’s mine.”
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im sorry but i blushed LMAO
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Me: I’ve got two words for ya: shut up.
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STOP WHY DID HE SAY THIS
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She’s the very definition of perfection – my unholy addiction.
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okay word
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She straddles me and continues kissing me, bunching my hair up in a painful grip. “God, I wish your dead mother is watching us right now from whatever pit of hell she’s in,” I say, then bite her bottom lip before sucking on it.
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HUH??????????????????????????????????????????????
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OK
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SIR????????????????????????
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“You…” I swallow, then shake my head a little. “What did you just say?” His laugh is short, menacing. “I’m your daddy, sweet pea,” he confirms, using the endearment mockingly. “Did you really think your mother had a drunken one-night-stand and ended up pregnant with you?” He chuckles. “Cignette, you’re my daughter, not a random elite’s.”
lauren ⋆☽˚
HUH!>!!?!? WHAT IN THE WORLD IS THIS PLOT TWIST?? SHE IS AN INCEST BABY?!???????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY>>>??? WHY WAS THIS A THING? WHAT DID THIS DO TO THE PLOT??!!!!!
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oh no
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STOP THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🚨🚨🚨🚨
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the author really thought she did something there huh 😭😭☠☠
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“I fucked my sister to keep our bloodline secure, Cignette. Call it old-fashioned or corrupted, I don’t care. You’re my daughter, and that’s the truth.”
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LMAO HELPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
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😭😭😭
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Lauren literally what
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i didn’t write it, it’s not my fault 😭