Somebody was holding my shoulders, pulling me out of Marco’s Mercedes. I threw up on my dress. I wrenched out of the stranger’s grasp. I fell on my ass in the street. I kicked at the car with my still-clumsy limbs. I tried to struggle to my feet to gouge out Marco’s goddamned eyes—I keep my promises—but my body was a few seconds behind my commands.
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