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Before this moment, I would have said I was strong. I go to the gym multiple times a week. I lift weights. My body is toned and in shape.
when tf do you to the gym. we’ve been following you for months now and there’s not been one mention
“Wrong. Her husband is going to fucking kill you for trying,” a terrifying voice announces,
ughhhh i just hate. a terrifying voice 🤣
“Not as hard as you,” she replies,
HAHA! stfu
“Metértela en la boca,” I demand, so dazed with desire that I lose my command over the English language.
be quiet
There’s one final little hole that I need to make mine, but not now. She’s not ready.
🤢
Any power I have pales in comparison to the one she wields over me. She has the ability to control me with nothing but a smile and a whispered word, a power that hundreds of men would kill to possess, and I’m not sure she even wants it.
blah blah blah
I’m silent for long, focused minutes as I pound inside her tight pussy with the single-minded focus of a Mormon on a mission.
WTF
Warmth unfurls inside me at his words. It’s been two weeks since Thiago and I went to Excess and we’ve grown closer every day since. We’ve even crossed a couple other items off my bucket list —
these time skips are annoying as shit. go girl show us NO DEVELOPMENT BETWEEN YOUR MAIN CHARACTERS! LOVE THAT!
I always knew you were – brainless, stupid, and emotionally unbalanced. Categorically unfit to work here.”
this is like the dad in rook & rebel where he kept telling her she’s an idiot and i’m actually on the dad’s side lol
“You pride yourself on being so smart Tess, but you’ve gone ahead and done the dumbest, most predictable thing in this situation. I’m embarrassed you were so weak. Even I didn’t expect that low of you.”
the author could have at least put some effort into making this conversation feel natural
My father was right – I’ve been so stupid.
😱
Somewhere along the way, I lost sight of how our story started.
boy did you
I think you let yourself get led off course by lust when you saw me. You thought with your dick instead of your head and tied yourself to the wrong girl.
lol true. we can’t even get a scene of him talking about how much he loves her without a buttplug in the next paragraph
He never comes home that night. And I lay alone in our bed, my knees held tightly against my chest, and I cry.
dumb bitch. JUST LIKE YOUR FATHER SAID!
She hasn’t left the house since I stormed out yesterday. Today is Friday, she should have gone to work, but she didn’t.
unless she took the necklace off?? 🤔
I run to the bathroom and fall to my knees, dry heaving painfully into the toilet as I clutch the bowl for both physical and emotional support.
🙄
The accountant was just the money mover, but someone else was calling the shots and putting this plan into action. Someone close.
hmmmmm who could it be 🤔
Marco looms above her, pointing a gun down at her head.
WOW IM SO SHOCKED!!!!!!! i called this like 44% in.
“She isn’t the first bitch who couldn’t mind her own business.” His lip curls up contemptuously. “I’ll deal with her like I dealt with Adriana.”
😱😱😱
As real as any truth has ever been, I know in my heart that she came for me. That the gunshots Marco fired into the ceiling were meant to draw her out of hiding. That she fell for it, more worried about my safety than she could ever be about her own.
lol
“WHERE IS MY WIFE?” he roars at a passing nurse, livid with fury.
this guy needs more chill. i really don’t see how he’s lasted this long
Between the moment where Tess was put into the back of the ambulance and when I spoke with her doctor, I spent thirty minutes thinking she was dead. Thirty. Fucking. Minutes.
and you didn’t kill yourself? for shame
I’m not a surgeon so I don’t operate on Tess, but when my shift is done, I find myself waiting outside the theater for news of how it went.
including this random nurses pov is crazy
The interest in his eyes is misplaced and unwelcome. At least that’s what I try to communicate to my body when deep arousal wakes and coils hotly in my core in reaction to the matching dimples that appear on either one of his cheeks.
NOPE that’s QUITE enough
“You’re pregnant, amor.”
NO WAY!!!!!!!!! yeah no duh. im not sure the baby would be fine though getting shot though???
The End
oh thank god
“Maybe I am,” he purrs, cupping her cheek. “Maybe we need to go back to our room so I can put a boy inside you.”
🤢
They tortured them, then killed their families. I couldn’t find it in me to have any compassion after all the hurt they’d caused. And now that I was pregnant, my priority was keeping my family safe.
🤔
