“When you get into this level, make sure you summon me, alright?” She dipped her chin in a subtle nod. “Good girl,” he murmured.
He says that too much. I get Ophelia responds to positive reinforcement, but it comes off as condescending. Taking into account she likes positive reinforcement *because her mom denied it* adds to the already paternal connotations. If you're going for a couple consisting of equals, you don't want to emphasize their power imbalance. I mean, he's an old-ass supernatural creature and she's a young woman—but still.
