❉spore loser❉

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Magic slammed into his body, sending him flying back from her. He rolled back to his feet in an instant, but his father had already reached her.
❉spore loser❉
The second 'back' doesn't need to be there. This author has a habit of repeating words in two close-by sentences. It gets distracting and breaks immersion. This book really needed better editing. We're in a scene of dramatic revelation but multiple mistakes break immersion, ruining the impact.
Phantasma (Wicked Games, #1)
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