Of Blades and Wings (Flame Cursed Fae, #1)

by Eliza Raine

My life will exist only inside these walls, alone until the sickness in my brain finally wins.

Could be more elegant

The Temple of Valhalla is available to all, always.

Why did he say nobody comes here if its a place everyone can access by default? Seems unlikely nobody goes there.

Did they make a mistake?"

Why would she think the gods made a mistake? Doesn't make sense... This dialogue is clunky.

I move toward the nearest cluster of people and get raised eyebrows and eye-rolls. I smile at everybody regardless.

This writing feels juvenile almost. And it tells instead of shows.

"Your parents asked me to."

Wasn't expecting that.

Branka.

Who is this??