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rolled her eyes.
rolled her eyes.
narrowed her eyes.
rolled her eyes.
rolled her eyes.
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Yes, Lieutenant Paris?” The slight man, an appointed officer, held up a datapad.
Sergeant Quezada’s hand shot up again.
**Loss of Continuity (LOC) & PRF
‘Sergeant Quezada’s hand’ never shown to go up a *first* time as ‘Lieutenant Paris’ was the questioner [SEE Highlighted, fourth paragraph preceding].
PRFs and LOCs are more patterns of writing software templates utilization by scifi genre authors; programming left on autopilot.
furrowed his brow.
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