Zora glowered,
So I had this problem at the end of book one- Finn just gets to the camp& already knows the General’s entourage by name? I think more of a formal introduction is needed - who are these people? What is their role in the group? I know roles might come out later, but the General could do a quick "Zora - Finn, Finn - Zora” it will help the reader feel they haven't missed something important - like an earlier meeting between characters at a different location.
