I should’ve cowered under the weight of his fury, but I was stunned. The vampire lord of Aristelle, a cruel, merciless, infamous immortal with a kill list in the thousands, directed every ounce of his attention on me. And I had not a single clue why.
This is fine so far but it would be better with only one POV. Kinda ruins the MMC's scary vampire vibe when you've already been in his teddy bear of a head.
