The Stars Are Dying (Nytefall Trilogy #1)

by Chloe C. Peñaranda

I dragged the tip of my new sword against the ground as a distraction, and the sultry way Rosalind slipped her gaze from Zath revealed it she was trying to rile him more so than any genuine attempt at seduction.

Am i crazy or this sentence doesnt make sense…there should be no "it"

Just as I braced myself, a dark silhouette appeared in the open doorway. I crouched back down. M.

M???? What