The Dread Descendant (The Dread Descendant, #1)

by Lauren Cate Leake

On the far end sunlight poured through enormous glass paned doors, which stood open, leading to the balcony.

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His daughters memory charm skills would make her a great asset in the war, if harnessed properly perhaps she could end it all together. But truthfully the Orator was far too frightened to ever bring the idea up again.

His daughter(‘)s memory charm skills would make her a great asset in the war, (and,) if harnessed properly(,) perhaps she could end it all together. But truthfully(,) the Orator was far too frightened to ever bring the idea up again (*bring up the idea again).