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Briar Boleyn
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September 11 - September 15, 2024
“With Orcades gone, a place opened up by our father’s side. Lorion and I won’t fail him as Daegen did.” “Really? But Lorion already has,” I informed her.
Would have been better to say, “But Lorion is already dead.” But that would make too much sense and be less cryptic. “Has what, failed? Failed how?” Instead of being directly to the point.
“I am not dead,” Tempest screamed. “You believe it is so easy to destroy the daughter of a god?”
Orcades died easily at child birth… but it sounds like she gave up her soul willingly for Medra. And do the sons not hold as much power or something because Daegen and Lorion both went quickly. And why exactly are you shocked at hearing that Gorlois is a god when you’ve had that thought many times before yourself?
“You don’t know everything, Sister.” The look of triumph on her face made me gasp.
She meant to say, “You don’t know ANYTHING, sister.” Because she doesn’t. Even when she had a glimpse inside her father’s mind she didn’t try to retain or decipher anything she saw, only thinking about him seeing Medra. Not any power he could wield or things he’s done or anything… idiot.
She nodded. “I should have told you sooner. But no one expected you to grow so fast, Medra. You’re a miracle.”
“There is a prophecy, Medra. One that Morgan would have told you about when she returned. But she’s not here now. I am. And... I don’t know. Perhaps it’s time you knew all of it.”
Yes, hurry before you die! I don’t know why y’all thought to wait for Morgan’s return knowing what she left to do and also knowing it was a high chance she wouldn’t return. As soon as you got there and saw her growth and intelligence and power, she should have been told everything to prepare herself. Her mother bred her to destroy her father, the same grandfather that almost lured her into his grasp because she was not told anything.
“But your aunt refused to accept that it was the reason you existed,” Odessa went on. “She refused to let the prophecy determine your fate, your future.” “And you?” I demanded, suddenly furious at my mother, furious at my aunt.
Why furious at her aunt? She was trying to shield her and let her live life as an innocent child should, no heavy responsibilities.🙄
“Madoc understands that we didn’t intend to...” Draven began. He stopped. “He understands. We did what we could to stop it. As soon as we had the chance.” We had killed the wolves, Draven meant. We had killed Lorion and Tempest. But not before they had slain refugees.
That part… instead of killing the wolves who were many and could attack many, you went for the enemies that were doing one on one combat. And on top of that, only one of you actively participated in the fighting while the other just stood there and watched instead of sending shadows out to subdue the wolves… I wouldn’t want your help. Your priorities are all messed up.
But it was not your fault. And you are doing what you can to make up for what’s happened.” He meant by providing a letter. Madoc and his wife, Amara, the healer, would carry it with them all the way to Pendrath. When they reached the border, they would give it to the first soldiers they found who would then escort them and the rest of the refugees to Camelot where they would be put in Dame Halyna’s capable hands. The letter ensured they would not be turned away when they reached our border, that they would be accepted and provided for.
I glanced around. We’d finished setting up our tents. Draven had gone to tether the horses. Guinevere was resting. Lancelet had gone to the stream to see if she could catch some trout. Hawl, as usual, was about to make dinner. We were spoiled, having the Bearkin with us.
So just leave Guinevere alone in the tents at the foot of the mountain then huh…? You just essentially said that no one would be aware of you being gone or whom you left with… Smdh.
Though a few streaks of black remained, her hair was mostly white. Her face bore the marks of countless years, with fine wrinkles tracing her features. She appeared ancient, her frail form seeming almost translucent against the bed.
How in the hell was her life force drained! Is this child one that she saved, brought back at the cost of her own life? OMG! That damn grail!
Not a dead specimen like the one she had been dissecting back in the Court of Umbral Flames. But one with unnatural life still flowing through its veins. I wasn’t sure I even wanted to know how she had done that. How she had managed it without coming out looking like Lancelet.
Well, that would be stupid, wouldn’t it? Wouldn’t you actually WANT to know how they both managed to be alive after an encounter that would normally leave one looking like Lancelet had or worse, dead? But you should be able to assume from Rachel’s state that whatever it was cost her a lot to achieve…
“What’s her name?” I asked eventually. “What do you call her?” “She has no name. None that I knew. I call her Lynette.”
So… then she has a name. Lynette. Why wasted breath saying she hasn’t one? 🙄🙄 This author really does not know how to get into the scenes in her story and feel them, make them realistic…
Draven stroked Rychel’s arm. “Stop. Don’t strain yourself. We can speak more tomorrow.”
After wasting much of her breath asking dumb questions… And I guess her previous words didn’t take the guesswork out of how long she has… I don’t even see why the author has dialogue. No one heeds anything anyone else says anyway or grasps it.
“They had different mothers,” was all I said. Which was true. “Amara, I want to ask you something.”
Instead of just saying “magic did this to her”… What she said could lead to meaning Rychel’s mom robbed was a pedo and got pregnant by a very young man who, decades to half a century later, got Draven’s mom pregnant. Smdh. Shit just makes no damn sense.
“Neither. None of those. But I have seen strange things before.” Amara met my eyes. “Something is draining her life force away.” “What exactly does that mean?” “It means that what happened to your husband’s sister, the woman in the tent—”
Well, at least SHE was smart enough to acknowledge that something magical had happened and cause Rychel to become that way instead of believing them having “different mothers” was the cause in the age disparity…

