“Mine,” he said, running his fingers over one of my nipples. He cupped my other breast. “Also mine.” “As long as you accept my rule equally,” I said softly, arching a little under his hands and gaze.
What in the hell does him saying her breast are his have to do with her ruling anything? OMG! This dialogue is atrocious at times. Just phrases stuck together that make no sense! Especially in the sex scenes. If you can’t write good dialogue in a sex scene, just DONT HAVE THEM SPEAK! You don’t NEED to talk during sex OR foreplay!
