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Ocealia
? weird names
Retrya,
?
Xal,
?
palace.
Repetition
with fingers covered in rings.
Repetitive descriptions
I brush out my waist-length dark hair, winging my eyes out with black liner, doing a long point at the outer edge and a tiny one at the inner corner.
I would have preferred to read this description from his perspective
"Rennalya,"
Weird names
wreak any more havoc
the use of this phrase in every book, drives me insane
Cetresar."
The names!!!!
"I'm working on it." "That's not an answer." "I had an unconventional childhood." "How?" "You'd never believe me if I told you." "Try me."
Ping Pong conversations, with no depth of character's reaction to the information.
She waves a small hand around us.
How? I thought her hands are tided
I watch as she launches herself impressively high into the air, backflips twice, and plummets, fully clothed, into the pool.
A bit exaggerated
"Do you want to?" I do, and that's a problem. "I must get rid of her." Lynna's eyes meet mine. "You’re beginning to like her?” "I cannot like her." "The heart wants what it wants." "My heart was frozen long ago."
Ping pong conversation
"How did your mother die?" "Of the flu." "And your father?" "Onyx stabbed him in the heart.” Fuck. "Why would he stab his father?"
Ping pong conversation
splashed boiling water
And no scars??
bursts
Repetition
bursts
Repetition
My Ten is a sorceress.
You meant Ren??
she’s injected a little of her sunshine into my thundery mood.
Absolutely love this.
