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March 3 - March 4, 2025
“Whatever. I’m going to keep an eye on you, bitch.”
unimpressive dialogue
He couldn’t let his father down.
His stakes aren't very high/motivational
“You’re joking,” was Brynleigh’s response.
the amount of words between each piece of dialogue is painful
Over the past month, he’d put on a good front of being a kind, caring man, but she knew the fae hiding beneath the surface was a cold-blooded killer.
watch this "incident" have been a total accident
He could see it now—their life would be filled with laughter, games, intelligent comments, and hours of conversation.
nothing about this book hints at open door romance
She kept replaying his touch, the memory driving her mad with want. She had so many suppressed emotions.
this all feels so shallow...
And you had to come in with your dirty blonde hair and sharp fangs and ruin everything.”
ooooooo burn
Ryker’s entire body tightened as pure, hot, primal need ran through him.
her sex dream seems so lack luster and random now....
It was like he peeled away all the layers of her identity and peered into her soul beneath.
i've read nothing to support this fact
After the bomb had gone off last night, the Chancellor had ordered that all the Choosing Participants, the attending Representatives, and their families be brought to The Lily to be guarded.
how many bombs have to go off in the same place for them to learn?
The Chancellor had decreed that all the participants needed to be kept apart while the soldiers contained the threat.
but why
“Have there been any more incidents while I was gone?”
i fucking knew it
And Brynleigh was Ryker’s entire world.
this is my first encounter with insta-love and idk how I feel about it.... none of their conversations or interactions seem to support this level of infatuation
His thumb found her clit, and he rubbed it. She screamed.
first time writing spice?
More emotions went away. The box threatened to burst open right then and there. That wouldn’t do.
jesus christ enough already
This won’t fall apart. I love her,”
holy fuck this dialogue is boring
The only thing that mattered was Brynleigh and how she felt in his arms. It was like they’d been made for each other.
epitome of telling but not showing. or even showing and not telling enough? idk this entire book seems so shallow and superficial
He came so hard that stars appeared behind his eyes.
somehow, this was anticlimactic
For the first time in her entire life, Brynleigh had found someone who truly understood her.
did he....?
