Deep in the Darkness

by Michael Laimo

“Cool beans.”

Best Line in the book... ;)

cool beans,

weak,

Is this correct ?

Like a head of hair that hasn’t been washed in a month.

in a way,

Should this be "faced away?"

“And if Page gets hungry, he’s

Is Page a girl?

sleepwalking

Nice homage to the authors other novels.

cover floor

cover THE floor?

That

Should be THEN?

save

should this be except ???

He

He - should be Her?

in

Remove the "in"