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Abstractions like condition, precipitation, and phenomenon are setups. Beware of Greek- and Latin-based words, especially those ending in -ion. Don’t be tempted to prettify a blunt noun like “a drunk” with a staggering noun phrase like “a person in an intoxicated condition.” Other words that lead to waterlogged phrases include case, character, degree, element, instance, kind, nature, and persuasion.
Sin and Syntax: How to Craft Wicked Good Prose
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